This page didn’t stay the location to my nano posts as I had hoped it could. I went ahead and moved what I was doing for nano to a new blog located at. www.muchadoaboutnano.wordpress.com. I am behind in word count, but hope to catch up one of these days. Each day I get a little further ahead, yet I have a long way to go.
Tomorrow is the half way mark and I’m about seven thousand words below what it should be then.
This is the current location for my posts for writing during November. My goal is to get to 50k words in the one month.
I’m not sure what a page allows me to do, so I’ll check this out tonight and see if I want to start a whole new blog just for nano later on if this doesn’t work out that well.
At midnight November 1, I completed a review for a story on Writing.com. Here is the review.
This is good, you had me on the edge of my seat until I almost fell off at the end. What happened to the ending? That must be the ending of chapter one, if you’re not going to do more with this book, then you may want to lengthen this story a bit more to have a better ending.
The sub-title says it was a new neighbor, yet she talks about recently purchasing the property. If it was less money than she expected it to be and if she now thinks it’s because of the information she found on the computer, then it sounds to me like the other person lived there for a while and she is the new neighbor. Maybe it’s just the way that portion of the phrase reads,
Another idea would be to end the sub-title with secrets and not include the part about the neighbor. This would avoid confusion at least until you work on the story a bit more.
This is a review for http://www.writing.com//main/view_item/item_id/826000-Neighborhood-Secrets-Part-1